Songs worthy of critique :O !!!!

[Sqthreer!]

Now that I'm beginning to get serious about making music a big part of my life, I'm gonna need some honest critiquing of the songs I create. I'm still learning, and part of learning is knowing what you're doing wrong. Since I know all of you share similar tastes in music as I do, I value your opinion and want to know what you think.

Here is the blog I'll be updating as I progress through my journey as a musician:
 - http://sqthreer.tumblr.com/
I'll be adding songs to it as I create them to get feedback so I can get them just right before I make them available for download.

And these are the places I'll be uploading my music:

• Reverbnation
• MySpace
• Last.fm
• Facebook
• Bandcamp

New songs so far:
 - Relatively Parallel
 - Chocolate Whips and Kitty Snips
 - Mellowdy
 - Silly Puppy Song
 - Gigglebyte
 - Drum Solo 01
 - A Dark Night in Detlyvos

[MortifiedocAlot]

Not allowing me to download currently.

[Sqthreer!]

Ah what the shit :[ never used google to post a download before. I'll have to look at it when I get home.

EDIT: Seems to be doing fine for me :/

[Sqthreer!]

Okay I'm a little more organized now I got a new page set up for my up and coming masterpieces.

http://www.reverbnation.com/sqthreer

[MortifiedocAlot]

I liked them both really, the second song more so then the first.

[Sqthreer!]

Thanks

Three more songs added!!
 - Gigglebyte
 - DRUM SOLOOOO
 - A Dark Night in Detlyvos

http://www.reverbnation.com/sqthreer

[dsam070789]

If I were to rate my top 3 it would go something like this:

1) Mellowdy - puts some tears in the eyes, love it. So smooth, it relaxes not only the body, but the mind as well
2) DRUM SOLOOOO - It sounds like it should be in a pinball machine! It's awesome!
3) A Dark Night in Detlyvos -At first it reminded me of Pachelbel's Canon, and then into something you would hear in a cut screen of a Zelda video game. Followed by something you would hear from Toe Jam and Earl (way old Sega game). 

Props to you for sure.

[Sqthreer!]

Thank you kindly, sir.

Another song "Relatively Parallel" can be found on any of the sites in the first post.